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but the thing that actually made me lose my will to live, to the point i was tempted to bang my head against a wall in the hopes id get concussion and hopefully amnesia so i could forget every detail about this god awful book. and it was the treatment of Mia’s twin sister, Maya. You’re anarchy in fancy clothing and will eventually ruin me and my relationship with the people closest to me.❞
Mia even snarls at him ”You’re so emotionally stunted that anarchy has become the soul of all your relationships.” anarchy, where? there was none? he literally doesn’t cause any havoc, he wasn’t scary or intimidating. he was about as exciting as the big lumps of clay he tries to mould into sculptures. An early Greek goddess of the sun, daughter of Helios and Rhode, and possibly goddess of the morning.The goddess of fame, gossip and renown. Her favour is notability, and her wrath is scandalous rumors. and the rambling prose of whenever Landon tried to be poetic didn’t even make sense. and i have to say, this type of language isn’t BAD, you can still make it elegant and poetic… and coherent. you don’t need to sacrifice fluidity just so you can cram as many synonyms for the word “blue” into a few lines. im not saying RK needs to “dumb it down” but it just didn’t work in this setting. everything he said was so inauthentic and forced, it had no fluidity or genuineness about it. listening to him speak was like nails on a chalk board, honestly.
should i also bring up the fact that landon learned sign language in 5 seconds? i understand he’s “gifted” but it just felt too unrealistic. he was just like “i watched 12 videos and now i’m fluent”My fingers splay on the strap of the mask covering my face. Breath condenses against the plastic and sweat coats my upper lip. Landon King was her nightmare come true. He understood her , but it was not for the best. He wanted to see her break. To see her beg. And then with her broken , ruined pieces , he planned to create the best artwork of his life. Mia reveals it in this grand cinematic way, too. like we should know: “The person who kidnapped me? It was her. [Mrs Pratt]”. idk what she wanted from me??? to react like
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